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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : ¯¨'*•~-.¸¸,.-~*' (swing and feel nothing) ¯¨'*•~-.¸¸,.-~*


ام حيدر
09-06-2008, 11:11 PM
¯¨'*•~-.¸¸,.-~*' (swing and feel nothing) ¯¨'*•~-.¸¸,.-~*




It has been a long time since I wrote something, here I come again to shine,

and write some lines, and its all mine..

frankly, it is my first time to write something about

love, i hope its going to be cool enough, and

It might be my farewell, as well,

I hope it going to be so well.


¯¨'*•~-.¸¸,.-~*' (swing and feel nothing) ¯¨'*•~-.¸¸,.-~*'




In the dreamy island, the magical breeze which spread the peace around.

Stars are fallen, the peace is in everywhere, life used to be the same as usual.

In panic spot, there was a legendary fear,

which mash the consistent sweetness.

In this spot, only remorse was there and the pain itself.

A sudden convening was made in the meddle of nowhere, remorse was the one

who set this up,

there also were, Pain, doubtfulness, fear, love, and hope.

- we are here today to shake this teary island,

and see the tears all over those deadly faces, Said the Remorse.

Silence in everywhere, just Pain and fear where mumbling, and doubtfulness is

taking control,

love is looking in a wild surmise, and hope is far away.

In a wired moment, a whisper voice comes from out of nowhere..

- I'm the one who is going to share you this job, said the Pain.

The remorse smile in a deceptive sight,

and the pain smiles too,



In this moment the doubtfulness stand still, and the hesitation is taking control.

While there is a hesitation, still there is deeply fear,

Love has no words, and hope either.

Nothing was moving. All are mumbling.

The remorse ordered the Pain to go and hit the dreamy island,

Doubtfulness has made its choice after long thinking,

and hesitations. Fear agreed too, but love and hope stepped aside.

In A panic sight, the island turn to black,

remorse shattered all smiles, Pain tore the happiness up, Doubtfulness kills the

truth, and fear spread the dread around.

Everything is screaming and no echo turn back,

they screamed to love and hope.

The hope was looking for the love, he crossed many mountains and lands.

But nothing occurred, hope is about to give up,

just imagine when hope gives up.

He swing and feel nothing,

tried to look around once again.

He crossed some miles, and he found a lonely swing,

while he got closer,

He saw the love is crying, and wounded from deep inside ..

The hope, wipe all tears, and said

- don't you worry, everything is going to be fine,

just have some faith.


The love start rethinking and smile an innocent smile,

-Let us reunite ourselves and be one spirit,

then no one will break us –said hope

The love agreed and they intent to return the peace in the imaginary island

The hope goes to the peace and love gathered the caring and sweetness..

It is a matter of time until the light turn back to the dreamy island..

And the land lives again, the spiritual love was there, and peace too..

All of them reunite the island and turn the light back..

even the smile was the splendid thing that was felt in all of this war.

No one heard anything about remorse, and pain,

and doubtfulness, and fear they're all gone for good.

The moral is in few words,

Never give up, just take a breath and recollect yourself, then search about love

and hope inward you,

then you will see the peace and the sweetness comes to your hands..

This work has been dedicated for you,

and the inspiration beyond the moral is just for you.

روحي الزهراء
09-09-2008, 01:44 AM
you're super talent ... Wow

God bless you sis .. I hope to see more & more


Go on !!!